"Opened Eyes" (Part 4)

by Joseph Linhardt, ©2003-2004 

(From Part 3...)

Peter set off toward the school, jogging quickly. He would return to the ravine and sort out what had happened. Had Jenny somehow taken him back to his house? Or had the police found him? If so, why did they leave him on the front lawn? 

Don't think, Peter told himself. Just run. 

He did, and was unaware of the dark shape that followed him as silently as smoke.

Peter crashed and stumbled through the woods, regardless of the sticks and thorns that were tearing his clothes. The sun seemed to be shining brightly despite the lateness of the day. Peter could see his way clearly. Small vegetation and tree branches whipped and stabbed at him as he blundered through the woods, oblivious to everything…including the dark shape that was soundlessly following him.

Finally, Peter burst through the last stretch of vegetation and tree branches. He skidded to a halt at the top of the ravine, remembering not to trust the grass that grew close to the edge. Peeping over the thirty-foot drop, Peter tried to see the object he had spotted earlier. Only a vague, shadowy ravine bottom met his eyes.

That’s odd. The sun’s shining brightly.

Something wasn’t right. Where was Jenny?

“Jenny!” Peter called, loudly. “Jenny! Are you here?”

Silence met him. Somewhere, a lonely bird twittered.

“Jenny? Bryan!” Peter tried again, looking frantically around himself for some sign of their presence. Only silence met his ears.

Could they both be in the ravine?

Peter moved quickly around to the sloped ravine side. He carefully began sliding down. This time, he knew which tree roots and branches to use as handholds and which ones were weak. Slowly, inch by inch, he made his way to the bottom. He did not fall.

“Hello?” he called out as he reached the bottom. “Is anyone here?”

A cold, dark silence met him, but Peter instinctively knew something was in the bottom of the ravine. He could feel its presence around him. The sheer sides of the ravine and utter silence of the forest added to Peter’s discomfort. His breath came in quick, sudden gasps.

He was not alone in the ravine.

“Who’s there!” he demanded, looking wildly in every direction. The fogginess that he had seen from the top of the ravine began to shift and gather at a single point. Slowly, a single shape took form. It was tall and dark. Peter felt repulsion and fear as The Thing slowly appeared.

“Wha…what’s going on?” stammered Peter. The shape had taken the form of a human, at least six feet tall. Dark eyes were riveted in its head like glowing stones. Blackness swirled and gathered around it. Large, strong hands folded themselves across the creature’s expansive chest. It eyed Peter contemptuously from its position in the shadows of the ravine sides.

“Who are you?” demanded Peter, trying desperately to keep his voice from shaking. He felt as if he were in the presence of something completely evil, of an unfathomable darkness. “Where are Jenny and Bryan?”

“You…can see me?” the figure replied, somewhat mystified. Its voice was soft but dangerously cunning.

“Of course!” said Peter angry and confused. “Who are you? What’s going on?”

A smile crept across the figure’s face. Glee filled its voice. “You don’t know, do you?”

Peter’s temper was simmering. He took a step forward. “No! I’m looking for two friends who’re lost in these woods!”

The figures eyes narrowed. The shadows seemed to grow with its displeasure.

“Another has come,” it said to itself. Raising its voice, the creature addressed Peter. “You cannot be allowed to leave!”

It took one menacing step toward Peter, who quickly assumed a Tai-Kwon-Do stance.

“Leave me alone!” he warned. The figure laughed.

“You honestly think you can stop me?” it hissed. “You will join your friend in our stronghold!”

The figure leapt at Peter. As it did, Peter instantly realized that the figure itself was completely black! Dark, smoke trailed after it. Even the sunlight was dimmed by its presence.

Peter immediately knew he could not fight the dark thing. Without thinking, he turned and tried to run, but a repressive, dark, numbing feeling swamped his mind and body. His legs felt like jelly. A hideous laugh came from the thing behind him. Peter looked frantically over his shoulder as he stumbled forward, and tripped over a tree root. He hit the ground hard.

Wrenching himself onto his back, he saw the horrible black thing was fewer than five paces from him! A dark hand reached out to seize him. The eyes of the thing seemed to burn with a black fire.

Suddenly, a thunderous voice split the air!

“Stop!” it commanded. The trees shook at the sound of thunderous voice! “You may not harm him!”

Instantly, the dark figure jerked backwards, as if burned! Its eyes jerked upward, looking past Peter at something that stood on the slope behind him. Peter looked shakily over his shoulder, his eyes wide. A tall, dazzling white figure stood on the slope! Light and purity streamed forth from the being. He was as white and calming as the dark figure was black and threatening. He leaped down the slope and landed between the dark creature and Peter.

“You!” spat the dark being. “Get out of my way!”

The white figure raised his right hand. “You have no power here. In the name of my Master, leave!”

At that moment, Peter heard the last sound he expected from the frightening, horrific black figure: a shriek of pure terror! Like a frightened deer, the dark thing turned and leaped thirty feet to land on top of the ravine! In seconds, it disappeared into the thick woods, leaving no trace of its presence. Even the vegetation was not disturbed. Peter’s jaw dropped open as he stared at the space the dark thing had been standing in a moment before.

Suddenly, he felt someone take hold of his arm.

“We have no time,” said the white being, turning to the slope. “We must leave at once.”

Peter pried his eyes away from the ravine top. “Wait a minute,” he said, standing. “What’s going on here? Who are you and what in the world was that thing?”

“There is no time to answer you here,” said the white being earnestly. “We must go. Now.”

“Where?” asked Peter, incredulous.

“To a safe place,” replied the being.

“Why should I trust you?” demanded Peter, annoyed. Surprisingly, the white man did not get angry.

“Don’t trust me,” he said, as if Peter’s question was completely ridiculous. “Trust the One who sent me.”

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